DBAF - Chapter Two

[VeggieXD]

[Rage]

I see ive been kicked out of character designing :/

[darkhawk5]

NIce, everything looks awesome, though i'm not crazy about how you drew Komaku

[Joker216]

I drew her exactly as she looked in her design.

As for Rage and Character Designing, Majin gave me a list of those who were involved. You have a problem, take it up with him.

[ShikaXDeath]

Nice man, everything's really good. Just that the dialogue is pretty bad here and there. Nothing to serious and hey at least Komaku looks respectable and not like Vegata's daughter who looked like a teen slut

[Joker216]

My point exactly Shika. I wasn't too big on the way Bra was designed.

As for dialogue, I've said this many times before, I just drew what was on the script.

Take all these problems up with the script writer.

Jeez, so far I've gotten mainly complaints and no critique.

[ShikaXDeath]

Sheesh, I didn't blame you for the faulty scripts. How 'bout I do a little editing here and there to make the scripts sound better?

[Joker216]

Yes, sounds like a plan to me. I have no problem with text edits. I just don't like it when people complain without giving ways to correct the problem.

[VeggieXD]

I can do that.

And Joker, you did an excellent job!

[ShikaXDeath]

Oki then. I downloaded the pages I think that need a bit of editin'. I'll upload 'em once I'm finished.